Some days when I’m writing, I wake up in the middle of the night and can’t fall back to sleep because I feel like an entire swath of my story– a scene, a chapter, sometimes even more– has just been downloaded into my head. My mind is so filled with lines of dialogue, descriptions, and plot points that I can almost feel my brain creaking trying to hold it all, and when I sit down with my computer my fingers fly over the keys, frantically trying to capture everything that’s so crystal clear in my imagination. I call those times visits from the muse (even though yes,I know, muses are really just manifestations of the authors unconscious mind, etc. etc). Regardless of where it comes from, it feels like magic. It’s the way we always want to feel when we write.
Although before I get to the heart of this post, I do want to say one thing. Yes, the visits from the muse are great, but I have other writing days where my children interrupt me 600 times in twenty minutes, or I have a cold or some other real-life intrusion, every paragraph feels like a chore, every page is a slog, and I will literally stop writing mid-sentence just because I’ve finally hit my word-count goal for the day. And then again somewhere in the middle, I have other days when I know exactly how I want the story to play out, but it still takes forever to write because I somehow can’t quite find the words to match what’s in my mind. And you know what? At the end of the day, when the story is all finished, I honestly can’t tell which chapters were written on which types of writing days. Nor, I don’t think, can anyone else. I get just about the same number of editorial compliments and criticisms on scenes that were written on pulling-teeth kinds of days as I do on the writing that happened during a visit from the muse. The muse isn’t the be all and end all, is what I’m saying, and if she’s just not showing up for you, don’t despair. I honestly think that just your showing up and writing each day, no matter what, is the single most important component of what makes a successful author.
That said, though, it’s easier (not easy, but easier) writing when the muse is willing to pay us a call. And magic or the unconscious mind, I do think we can, to a degree, make those visits more likely to happen. So here are my top three favorite strategies:
Let Go of the Fear. I know, I know. Easy to say, hard to do, right? As far as I know, every writer out there has moments (or days or weeks) of feeling those crippling moments of self-doubt when you’re convinced that you’re writing the worst book in the history of language itself. I get it. But have you ever read Blake Snyder’s, Save the Cat and the sequel, Save the Cat Strikes Back? Blake has a technique he recommends called, Here’s a bad way to do this, and it’s one of my favorite ways of getting past the fear. When you’re stuck on a story and every word is a struggle, ask yourself, What’s a really bad way to do this? It works with everything from plot points to scenes to single sentences. Give yourself permission to think of the worst possible ways to accomplish whatever it is you’re trying to do– and somehow the permission to be bad often frees you enough that you wind up thinking of a good solution. When I’m stuck, staring at the screen trying to think of a good way to capture a particular moment or description or feeling, I’ll let myself write everything down in flat, completely pedestrian language, just to get the job done, even if it’s not done well. I don’t let myself worry about showing, not telling, or not lapsing into passive voice, or avoiding cliches. Yet somehow, having that bad version down gives me a starting point, something that I can improve and build on. They say you can’t edit a blank page, and it’s true.
Set a Time Limit. Software like Write or Die is a little extreme for me personally, but I do find having a set time limit to my work period helpful. Sometimes on the weekends my husband takes the kids to the grocery store, and I’ll tag along expressly so that I can sit in the car with my laptop and work while they’re doing the weekly shopping. Something about having that limited chunk of time in a completely distraction-free setting is incredibly helpful to letting me get out of my own way, tune into the story, and just write.
Immerse yourself. We all have so many distractions and busy-ness in our lives, but don’t underestimate the power of trying as much as possible to let your mind keep working on your story, even when you can’t actually be at the computer. I daydream about my stories whenever I have a spare second– driving, doing the dishes, etc. This may occasionally make me seem slightly zombie-like to my family when they try to talk to me, but I’ve had some of my best realizations that trigger a visit from the muse that way.
What about you? Do you have any strategies for calling the muse?
About Anna Elliott
Anna Elliott is an author of historical fiction and fantasy. Her first series, the Twilight of Avalon trilogy, is a retelling of the Trystan and Isolde legend. She wrote her second series, the Pride and Prejudice Chronicles, chiefly to satisfy her own curiosity about what might have happened to Elizabeth Bennet, Mr. Darcy, and all the other wonderful cast of characters after the official end of Jane Austen's classic work. She enjoys stories about strong women, and loves exploring the multitude of ways women can find their unique strengths. Anna lives in the Washington DC area with her husband and three children.
Encouraging article, Anna!
Finding the peace to pen in my microcosm of mayhem is my biggest challenge as of late. Thanks for the tips.
(But you actually tag along to the grocery store and write in the car instead of staying home? Do they crack a window for you? :D )
Yes, and yes. :-) I honestly get so much more done than if I’d stayed home where there are more possible distractions.
Wishing you all the peace you need to write!
Oh, boy, do I understand. If I venture outside my room, which is often necessary, I see All The Things. I need horse blinders.
I’d forgotten Blake Snyder’s method of asking, “What’s a really bad way to do this?” It works!
For me, the “muse” tend to visit more in late stages of a project. That’s when I feel the flow. Many elements are working at once. Pieces of the story carom off each other like particles streaming from the sun. Everything I encounter in life relates. Everything lights the story in some way and the story illuminates everything, or so I imagine.
Currently I’m at the beginning of a project. The muse aren’t yet hanging around. I’m swimming in possibilities and wrestling with a few fundamental decisions about style and story world. (There is a supernatural element yet I don’t want it to feel like urban fantasy or stories easily found on TV.)
I don’t blame the muse for partying at other writers’ houses. My head space isn’t yet festive, and maybe that’s the way I need to look at it. Rather than thinking of what I *don’t* want the novel to be, I should see it as limitless, grand, unique and all mine.
There. Feeling better. Thanks, Anna. May the muse be with you every day.
Thanks, Benjamin! That’s an excellent way of looking at things. I also tend to have the muses visit while in the later stages. Often the last 1/4 or so of the book just flies for me, because at that point the pieces are all in place and I can see what the story needs to be. Before that, there can be a lot more groping in the dark trying to find my way.
Great post. You describe my experience perfectly. Immersion is important. Sometimes I go to a retreat center for three days where there are no distractions and all I do is write (and sleep). It’s a very productive three days. And of course when I want to finish a book I set the alarm for 4 am and just do it. But isn’t it lovely when the muse visits and the words flow easily? It’s truly a wonderful feeling.
It truly is wonderful! I can imagine a writer’s retreat would definitely be great for blocking out distractions.
I appreciate – and so agree with – what you’ve written. My best invitation to “the muse” is to keep writing, and if I’m having trouble doing that, be involved in writing-related work and pleasure (like reading). An open mind is an open invitation – that’s how I see it.
Yes, very well put! Reading definitely keeps those doors open for me, too. What I’m reading can have nothing to do with my own book at all, but often somehow in the midst of being involved in someone else’s story, I’ll have a lightening-bolt realization about my own.
Point #1 is a good one. I can’t remember the writer who said it, but it made sense to me: “Every morning, I get up and vomit into my typewriter and spend the rest of the day cleaning it up.”
We have it so much easier these days with computers. It’s a lot easier to clean up our initial mess.
Ha, it does feel like that some days! Great quote.
The muse has a habit of handing down shiny bits at the least convenient moment (making me jump for the nearest notebook and pen), I can live whole weeks in immersion, and I definitely want to try the Really Bad Way technique.
My own way of summoning the muse, though, is freewriting.
I take a notebook, a prompt (my go to place for this is A Writer’s Book of Days, by Judy Reeves) a deep breath, and then I write three pages in longhand, without stopping. Usually I can turn even the most outlandish prompt to cover some aspect of what I’m writing about, and often I end with surprises, ideas and shiny toys. I’ve written huge chunks of my first draft in this way – and still use the technique both to work at knots in revision and warm up before a writing session.
I often outline writing freehand– something about the pen to paper connection really helps me think at certain stages in the process.
Hi, Anna:
On your third technique: One of my favorite and most influential professors in college often told his students this little nugget from William James:
“We learn to ski in the summer, and we learn to swim in the summer.”
What he meant: only by flailing away at a difficult problem for hours, days, weeks, do we give our unconscious mind the material it needs to work on the problem while we’re supposedly “away from the office” — bathing, walking the dog, wool-gathering, etc.
We need to trust the unconscious but we can’t lazily defer to it. We need to prep our unconscious minds — it’s a way of summoning the Muse. She does not reward slackers.
BTW: I studied math, and the classic examples of this were Archimedes in his bathtub, and Poincaré, who wrote extensively on the role of the unconscious in creative work: https://www.brainpickings.org/2013/08/15/henri-poincare-on-how-creativity-works/
My husband is a math guy, too, and he would agree with you! :-) It does take a certain degree of training so that creative thinking becomes your brain’s ‘default’ mode in any idle moment, but it’s so worth it.
Thanks for the tip about writing badly. I’m off to do that right now!
Ha! I’m sure it won’t be nearly as bad as you think. Just getting words down on the page is half the battle a lot of the time.
“and I will literally stop writing mid-sentence just because I’ve finally hit my word-count goal for the day.”
Oh, yes.
When my muse is off frolicking with the other fickle fairies and all my other tried-and-true tricks don’t work, I always have this. When I’ve hit the count, just quit—and celebrate that I’ve made my goal for the day.
There’s a wonderful book called “Writing Open the Mind” that has exercises that tap into the subconscious that I’ll use as a warm-up on days when I’m stuck in my left brain. I think the Muse is the subconscious. Then again, the Muse might be some entity, or something Divine, that we’re channelling. Hey, I’m open to all possibilities.