Freelance Editing: How to Hire an Editor for Your Book or Query Letter
Chuck Sambuchino on Dec 10 2012 | Filed under: Business
GIVEAWAY: I am (again) so very excited to announce the Nov. 2012 release of my newest book: CREATE YOUR WRITER PLATFORM. It’s a book all about how to build your visibility, brand, network and discoverability so you can better market yourself and your books. I’m giving away 1 copy to a random commenter based in the U.S. and Canada; comment within one week to win. Good luck! (Update: Joe Levit won.)
During the past few years, I have started doing more freelance editing for query letters and books/novels. And during that time, I’ve definitely started to notice some tips that I think would help writers who are seeking to get their work edited by a professional. With that in mind, here are 6 pieces of advice for hiring a freelance editor as well as the answers to 4 frequently asked questions on the topic.
6 PIECES OF ADVICE
1. Get a test edit. Hiring a freelance book doctor costs money, and you don’t want to plunk down a large chunk of change before you’ve seen the kind of services an editor will provide. So ask for a test edit. A test edit basically means you pass along a few pages and get them reviewed to see what kind of notes and ideas the editor is making in terms of proofreading and content work. Test edits usually work one of two ways: 1) You pass on 1-2 pages and the editor reviews them for free; or 2) you pass on a more substantial number of pages (10-50) and simply pay the editor as normal for those pages. If you like what you see from the test edit, then you can move forward on a bigger deal.
2. Look for referrals and success stories. These days, everyone lists “freelance editor” on their qualifications. Scan the ads of writing websites and publications to see dozens of people vying for your business. That’s because “freelance editor” is a desirable profession, as the work can be done from anywhere. So when you’re seeking out a freelance editor, seek not only an impressive bio and qualifications, but also referrals and success stories. Talk to writing peers who have used editors and find out if they liked what they received in the exchange. And, of course, nothing succeeds like success — so look at what projects the editor has worked on that 1) got published by a traditional publisher, 2) secured literary agent representation, or 3) had notable success after being self-published. That will be a big clue if the editor is truly helping people get published and achieve their goals.
3. Be upfront about what you want out of the edit. This is a big one. Know if you’re in a hurry to get feedback. Know if you want an edit that’s heavy on copyediting and proofreading, or an edit specifically to analyze the pacing/tempo of your writing. Know if you want the editor to take a closer look at some section that’s bothering you. If you’re seeking a nonfiction book proposal edit, for instance, it would help if you knew that you wanted the review to mostly focus on your marketing plan and platform, provided you felt that was the weakest section. If you do not give specific instruction, the editor will take a broad approach to the work.
4. See about getting a second look for a little more. After I edit someone’s query or synopsis, they sometimes ask if I will review the revised version for free. Unfortunately, this is something I cannot do. It would be like working overtime and not getting paid. At that same time, I didn’t feel good about asking them for a double fee to review the revision, because reviewing said revision is less work than the first go-round. So I started saying upfront to clients that if they wanted a second query edit (an edit of the revision), it would simply be a little more than the original edit price. Some people really desire this second look, while others don’t need it. If you’re in the first group, ask upfront about getting a discounted second review. (Please note that just because an editor can’t do a free second review, that doesn’t mean that they can’t answer questions about the notes given. An editor should always want their suggestions to be clear and easy to follow.)
5. Beware anyone who charges way too little or way too much. Several years ago, I got an angry e-mail from a writer who had almost gotten scammed by someone claiming to be an “independent editor.” The writer and editor had a simple back-and-forth dialogue, but when it came time to issue payment, the editor asked for “$5,000U.S.” (Asking for “U.S. dollars” is almost always a red flag!) The writer quickly surmised she was being scammed and backed away. The flipside of this coin is anyone who promises you everything for way too cheap, with a response like, “Sure, yeah, I can do anything you want! I can do everything and anything to your 120,000-word novel for just $150!” This latter editor is likely just skimming work at best and giving generic, pre-packaged remarks in their feedback. Avoid both of these types of scammers.
6. Always speak of your novel in terms of word count, not pages. The font you choose and the margins you use can drastically affect page count. So always speak in terms of the novel’s completed word count (e.g., 78,000 words).
4 FREQUENTLY ASKED QUESTIONS
1. “How much do freelance edits cost?” It varies on the editor, their level of expertise, what you’re asking of them, how fast you want them to work, and, naturally, the length of the novel. All those figures make the final fee vary greatly. To get a novel edited, you could be looking at anywhere from $400 – $2,000, depending on the factors I mentioned. Some editors charge by word while some charge by page. Those who are doing proofreading or editing a nonfiction book proposal usually work at an hourly rate. Query and synopsis edits are typically a flat fee.
2. “Do freelance editors do proofreading for grammar and spelling? Or do they edit the content of the novel?” Some do the former; some do the latter; some do both. Proofreading is generally cheaper than content/story editing. Ask upfront about this. Different editors have different fortes, and, again, it all depends on what you want to get out of the edit.
3. “Do I really need an editor before submitting?” I can say with absolute certainty that you need someone to look over your work and give you blunt, constructive feedback. People need outside perspectives on their writing to show them the flaws they cannot see. With that in mind, a lot of people seek out beta readers (writer peers and friends) to edit their work. Beta readers are a good way to go — but these readers must be intelligent, capable, and blunt (and hopefully published, themselves). Otherwise, you may just get a lot of positive reviews from people who love you but can’t objectively edit your work. It’s typically writers who don’t have a reliable cadre of beta readers that seek out a freelance editor.
4. “Is a contract signed?” If you want one, the editor should definitely provide one. If the editor puts up a big stink about a contract, that, to me, sounds like a red flag.
Anything I’m missing? A helpful tip or the answer to an FAQ? Please feel free to share in the comments. Happy holidays to all! I’ll see you back on WU in 2013. Know that I’m also speaking at a lot of writers’ conferences in 2013 if you can get out to meet me personally. Look here for a list of writers conferences, or here to see my column on “What are the BEST Writers Conferences to Attend?”
Other posts by Chuck Sambuchino:
- How to Start Your Novel.
- 5 Encouraging Reasons for Creating a Writer Platform.
- Tips for Writing a Novel Synopsis.
- What are the BEST writers’ conferences to attend?
- Building Your Writer Platform — How Much Is Enough?
- 9 Questions About How to Write a Query Letter.
- Should You Sign With a New Literary Agent?
- 11 Frequently Asked Questions About Book Royalties and Money.
GIVEAWAY: I am so very excited to announce the Nov. 2012 release of my newest book: CREATE YOUR WRITER PLATFORM. It’s a book all about how to build your visibility, brand, network and discoverability so you can better market yourself and your books. I’m giving away 2 copies to random commenters based in the U.S. and Canada; comment within one week to win. Good luck! (Update: Joe Levit won.)

























I’ve experienced both sides of editing now, having had my novel edited, and having been recruited to edit someone else’s novel. I hadn’t really how much time it takes–now I understand why editors charge so much. But it’s interesting to learn what sort of fees to expect and I’ll pass on your advice to other members of our writers’ group. Thank you.
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So much great information and suggestions! I will definitely be back to read more posts :)
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Fantastic! And just the information I was looking for right now.
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A lot of good tips, it’s always hard submitting work. This answered many questions I had about editors and submissions.
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Thank you for the article. A number of great tips that will be utilized. I have so many questions that were answered. It gave me clarity and understanding.
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Having recently gone through this myself, I can’t emphasize the importance of a sample edit. I received numerous replies to a post I had made on the Editorial Freelancers Association page. Having these tips would definitely have come in handy then!
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Thank you for the many valuable tips. I am always afraid of being scammed. But, finding a good editor can be vital to a book’s success.
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Thanks for the tips, I have just about finished my first novel, and although, I’ve done the research, now that I’m here, it is overwelming, so any and all advice is greatly appreciated. Thanks again, and Happy Holidays!
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Hi Chuck,
I really appreciate the tips you provided here, especially the information about potential rates and reliabilities. Do you have any information in your book about whether it can work to have a nonfiction, service-based blog to support a children’s lit fiction body of work? I’m planning on creating such a site to build an audience for books I’m just now writing.
Thanks,
Joe.
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Starting with a test edit makes a great deal of sense. As the client, it is important to ensure a good fit with any editor. Although it can be ego-crushing to hear about flaws in our work, getting feedback from a new set of eyes can make all the difference between good and great.
Thanks for all your excellent pointers.
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Great article Chuck! May I add that it’s good to get extra eyes even after the editor is done with the edits, such as a teacher friend or someone familiar with your genre and topic. I’ve learned a lot through the publishing process and am always looking to learn more, so your article is very helpful!
Have a terrific day!
Angil
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I’m just starting out as a freelance editor, so these tips were very helpful. Am having to charge low rates on Odesk as I build a client base and review APA standards, etc. Thanks for the tips!
Sincerely,
Linda
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Thanks for the helpful info. I never would have though to take the time to point out the areas I am concerned about to a proofreader. That is something I am going to do next time.
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Thanks, Chuck, for the info. It’s good to know the price range and what to ask for and to expect. There’s so much info out there…hard to tell what’s reliable sometimes. Thanks!
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Super post. Your info always clears the muddy waters. This post goes into my Reference Files. Thanks, Chuck. Happy Holidays.
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Thanks, Chuck. Your insite is always helpful & timely. It’s great to know that there are people out there to help writers at the starting block, like me. Thanks again.
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I really like the test edit tip!
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Excellent advice on this.
As a writer and editor, I can’t tell you how important it is to get a thorough, professional edit before putting your work out there.
There will always be things you miss, grammar issues you didn’t know about, plot inconsistencies, etc., and having a good editor can turn your book from good to great.
I think it’s important to find someone who has the same mindset as you do, and to ensure you follow the same style guide (ie. If you follow Chicago Manual of Style, find someone who edits CMS). If you don’t follow a style guide, please go out and buy one. It will make your life 10,000x easier.
The test portion really will be the indicator of whether the editor is right for you. If you disagree with everything commented on, then you might not be suited for one another. I also think it’s fair for any freelance editors to offer a free sample (I usually offer 1000 words).
Good luck to all writers out there! Also, I can’t stress this enough from an Industry standpoint, if you don’t have a style guide, GET ONE. All Publishers work according to a style guide (or should), so meet your editor halfway and learn one.
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Excellent tips! Thanks for your insight, Chuck, and for figuratively knocking some sense into my head.
For one thing, I don’t know why I haven’t considered a test edit, especially since my job used to include interviewing prospective editors of technical writing and I always gave them a tough test edit. I know first-hand that impressive résumés and stellar references don’t mean someone edits the way I want them to.
My 3-page test was purposely riddled with both blatant and subtle errors, but I like to think my manuscript is a squeaky-clean flow of inspired prose (:-)), so I would definitely want to pay for a 50-page test edit to see what an editor is really like.
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This is a highly daunting area that I really need to get a handle on.
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Awesome! Thanks so much for the post and info. And giveaway. What fun.
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This was very helpful. Nice and to the point. Thank you.
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Great article for writers just trying to break in. These are the sort of articles that I subscribe to the magazine for.
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The idea of hiring an ediotor to review my work still makes me wary. As far as grammar, punctuation, spelling, and usage is concerned, I fon’t think others would spot anything I haven’t spotted myself. As for craft and content issues, how would any editor have tthe exact idea of what I’m trying to get across? Wouldn’t I rish losing the “voice” of my work if I incorporated another person’s changes?
Perhaps what I need is more a “collaborative” edit, in which the editor would sit down with me and discuss what I want to get across, then suggest step-by step alterations as we go through the work together…
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It sounds like you have compiled a book perfect for writers entering the market to make a name for themselves. I think you have given a lot of good advice.
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I have to say I agree completely with hiring a freelance editor. I just got back my comments about 2 weeks ago on my manuscript and I wished I had hired a freelance editor earlier, a year ago! She really helped me with plot and story development. Critique groups are great for keeping one motivated, but they only hear your works in bits and pieces, someone good to read the entire work over is essential. I’m glad I hired her for a second look once I incorporate all the changes she recommended!
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I found an editor using elance, but the responses I received ran the gamut from cheap to overpriced. Only a few demonstrated professionalism by offering a free sample edit. Others touted their own novels as examples of why they were great editors. I passed on those.
There were offers from other countries, some of whom could not even type a coherent sentence.
Look for those with lots of positive feedback, and read the feedback carefully to make sure they are for projects that mirror yours, not “she edited my 2 page term paper”. If on a tight budget you might find a bargain newbie who will do a better job than no edit at all, but this could be hit or miss. You really need someone with experience who can not only point out SPAG errors, but other bad writing such as overuse of certain words or phrases, story flow, plot holes, etc.
For $50 I found someone who offered an awesome 5 page critique on various issues with my story that did not come up from “free” critique partners or my editor.
All this said, if you have reliable references to go on, which I did not at the time, word of mouth from someone who has already been there can be a great way of finding someone for yourself. Don’t skip the sample page edits, though–I can’t think of a better way to see if an editor is the right fit for your story, and vice versa.
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I love the idea of a “test edit”. There’s nothing worse than having an editor you’re totally out of sync with….except maybe having an agent you’re not in sync with….;-)
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Chuck – great post & great tips. I never could have imagined how valuable an editor would be until I had my MS professionally edited. It was money well spent. She’s the grammar queen I had thought I was, she helped with sentence structure and pointed out statements that didn’t make sense. The fresh perspective was enlightening.
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This is great information, Chuck. There is so much to keep in mind but you outline quite logically. I appreciate the encouragement. Thank you.
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As always, good helpful ideas! Thanks for being realistic.
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As a writer with no real beta-readers, I’ve found it very helpful to take the occasional class in order to get constructive feedback. But nothing beats working one-on-one with a professional editor. They are worth the ‘cover price’.
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Great advice! I will share your tips with my writing groups. Several members have struggled with local freelance editors and your tips will help all of us out.
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Did I make it in under the deadline…the 17th at midnight PST? Oh well, if not, I’ll still buy your book.
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Terrific advice. I think a test edit is the single most important step in finding the right editor. It also helps an editor determine if he or she is the right fit for your project.
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Absolutely agree. Thanks for the comment.
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Chuck,
Great advice. I always offer a test edit for anyone who is looking for proofreading/editing for their project. It’s a great way to see if the two of you can and want to work together, and a wonderful starting point to open up the conversation about exactly what sort of editing the author is looking for: proofreading, light editing, heavy editing including suggestions on improving storyline??
There really are so many factors that go into the fee (as you mentioned) and it is truly worth the cost of having an educated eye read over your work prior to submission. Even though I am a freelance editor myself, I still have someone else read over my own writing. Sometimes you’re just too close and your mind will “fill in the blanks” or automatically correct mistakes without actually catching them in order to fix them!
Since some writers were asking questions about this very topic last week, I submitted this post to our writer’s chat room (http://www.writerschatroom.com) for a full discussion on 1 of our Wed. night’s meetings. Hope you don’t mind! Thanks. :)
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Aside from sites like Preditors and Editors, is there a directory of legitimate freelance editors who may even specialize in a certain genre (like romance)? Thanks, as always, for your helpful tips and articles.
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Thanks for the great post! I like your suggestion of providing writers with sample edits. It’s a good way to give writers an idea of what to expect from their editors. I would love to see an accompanying post to this one about what editors should ask prospective clients, red flags to watch out for concerning writers, and cultivating the editor-writer partnership from an editor’s point of view.
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Thanks, Chuck for a concise article on a confusing topic. I especially appreciated #3 in the 4 FAQs. As an author who participates on a critique group, I’ve often wondered if I need a freelance editor as well.
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Such great advice Chuck! Too bad I didnt have this checklist before I made all these mistakes. Results? Anxiety and sleepless nights. Where is my book? When will it be done? How is it coming along? Waiting without information. I learned the hard way, w/o your list.
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At least you found the list now, June — hope it helps.
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