A Summer in Europe: Finding Meaning in Florence
Guest on Dec 02 2011 | Filed under: Book Talk, CRAFT
Therese here. I’m so happy to present today’s guest to you, Marilyn Brant, who’s here to tell us about her experience in making setting pertinent to character growth. Marilyn’s third novel, A Summer in Europe, was just released this past Tuesday. If you love books that plunge you into place, know that Marilyn is a master at describing setting in her novel. But that’s just part of the picture. Said Publisher’s Weekly of her book:
Brant’s newest…distinguishes itself with a charismatic leading man and very funny supporting cast, especially the wonderful elderly characters with their resonant message about living life to the fullest.
From Romantic Times:
Brant’s charming and engaging tale will allow readers to immerse themselves in the magic and beauty of Europe along with the characters. Although the descriptions of the scenery are amazing, the development of the characters and their unique personalities are what really make this novel shine. What an enjoyable escape!
Read on to hear Marilyn describe her experience in transporting readers and characters both.
A Summer in Europe: Finding Meaning in Florence
Therese, thanks so much for inviting me back to WU—it’s wonderful to get to visit here again!
Just this week, my third women’s fiction book from Kensington, A Summer in Europe, was released and, as the title announces (with no attempt at subtlety, LOL), the heroine of my story gets to spend some of her summer in Europe. My main character, Gwen, is a junior-high math teacher who is unaccustomed to foreign adventures or, really, to dealing with anything outside of her ordinary routine. While she’s abroad, she starts out very much as an “accidental tourist,” trying, like William Hurt’s character in the film by that name, to regulate her environment. To control it. To keep herself from being too affected by it. She’s also a bit naïve about love, similar to E.M. Forster’s heroine, Lucy Honeychurch, from A Room with a View, whose world is altered immeasurably by a visit to Italy.
Like Forster’s Lucy, Gwen’s first impressions of Italy (and the unusual people she meets on her trip) spark the initial changes in her outlook and set her on a path quite different from where she’d been heading. She absorbs the highlights of Rome, Pompeii and the Isle of Capri, but as their tour bus zips toward Tuscany, I know she’ll be entering an ideal place to have a key realization or two. In fact, I couldn’t have made up a European city that was better equipped to inspire a personal rebirth—both literally and symbolically—than the actual Birthplace of the Renaissance: Florence.
As writers, I know you’ll know what I mean right away when I say this, but I spent hours sifting through my memories of that city for significant details.
I haven’t been back to Italy since 1997, so I invested no small amount of time lurking on Italian travel web pages and flipping through our old photo albums. I ate lots of pasta and gelato for inspiration. (Hey, I’m nothing if not a slave to my art.) And I repeatedly walked my main character through my mental map of Florence, considering each of the major sites—and some of the minor ones—trying to figure out which would best reflect the sense I was hoping to create in that chapter: the growing revelations of a woman who’d vowed to begin her life anew.
What would she see that might make her question her old ways of doing things?
How would she interpret the classic art, architecture, history and culture of a city so much older than her Midwestern American hometown?
Which sites would have specific relevance for her and, most of all, why?
For any of you who may have visited Florence before or even read about it in any detail, you realize just how many famous sites the city offers to us. To name only a handful: Michelangelo’s David at the Accademia, the Uffizi Gallery, the Pitti Palace, the Ponte Vecchio, Brunelleschi’s Dome (aka “The Duomo” or the cathedral known as Santa Maria del Fiore), the Medici Chapels, Piazza della Repubblica, the San Giovanni Baptistery with Ghiberti’s bronze doors, the Arno River, the Basilica of Santa Croce, not to mention one of my favorite gelaterias in the world: Festival del Gelato. (There’s always a place for good food in fiction, right?!)
During the course of Gwen’s visit, she gets to make stops at quite a few of these sites. She reacts in her own way to each of them and, slowly, begins to show changes in her thinking as a result. She also begins to collect mementos and memories—both of which she’ll carry with her throughout the rest of the trip. To me, it was important to have her not only learn something new during each phase of her journey, but to have a token that would remind her of that lesson later. Because, of course, there will be conflict ahead (!!), and she’ll need to remember what she’d learned. So, in Florence, I gave her a very specific object, something tangible that she could purchase and take with her, knowing it would emotionally rocket her back to that time and place whenever she would look at it.
And I knew for sure that this would be true…because I gave her something of mine. Something I personally found on a visit I took to Italy, which I then brought home with me. I still have it.
Back in the mid-1990s, my husband and I were window shopping on the Ponte Vecchio, the historic bridge that spans the Arno River. You can see it on the left-hand side of the photo of us—and, yes, that picture is from the ‘90s, too. (How young we were!) The merchants on the bridge are known for selling gold jewelry, so we saw lots and lots of items fashioned beautifully out of 24-carat gold, including some famous landmarks from around the country. There was a necklace with a finely tooled pendant shaped like the famous Duomo, the signature image of the city (it’s on the right-hand side of that same skyline photo). There were cases of pins and broaches featuring my favorite sculpture—the David. I remember a golden replica of La Bocca della Verità—aka “The Mouth of Truth”—which had been one of the most charming sites we’d visited in Rome. And there were quite a number of earrings, pins and necklaces in the shape of Venetian carnival masks, which I happen to love and collect in their full size.
I bestowed upon Gwen a similar shopping excursion on that bridge and, in the course of her Florentine retail adventure, she purchased one of those items. I won’t tell you which piece she chose specifically, but it was something she ended up wearing throughout the remainder of her trip. For her, it became a personal touchstone from that day forward—an object she could tap with her fingertips and remember something important that she’d just begun to learn.
To me, this is where our travel experiences and our fiction writing merge. We could go anywhere for story inspiration—it doesn’t have to be a place that requires a passport—but, as writers, I feel we need to bring with us our deepest awareness because we don’t know when we’ll be called upon to share a memory or a memento with our characters. I bought a lot of little things in Europe (my husband would be the first to tell you just how many!), but not all of them are items that would have any meaning to Gwen. Were I to take another character with me to Florence, I’d have to walk through the city all over again, sifting through different details in hopes of finding the ones most significant to this new character. In some ways, it’s like getting to revisit a favorite place with your child. You get to see it anew through their eyes. And even getting to remember—in such a personal way—a city I haven’t seen in 15 years was, for me, very much like taking the journey again, too.
What about you? Is there a place you personally love that you’ve found yourself sharing with the characters in your fiction? Or, perhaps, an object you came across in real life that you worked into a storyline? I’d love to hear about it!
I’ve been celebrating this new book by taking a trip around the web to share some of my favorite European sites and to explain how my own real-life memories from visits abroad influenced the writing of this novel. If you’re a travel lover like me, my book tour/grand European adventure is in progress with the itinerary up on my website. I hope you’ll join me for a few other cities on the tour! And if you’d like to read an excerpt from A Summer in Europe, which is a Literary Guild and Rhapsody Book Club featured alternate selection for December 2011, you can find one here.
Thanks, again, to all of you for having me here today!
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How totally charming, Marilyn. It has inspired me to put more ‘meat’ into my location descriptions. What is it about Italy…?
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Alex, thank you. And I ask myself that about Italy all the time, too… It certainly gives us a lot of wonderful things to try to describe :).
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Marilyn, thanks for this post. Setting is a crucial and often overlooked element of storytelling. When used properly, setting can underscore the theme, foreshadow events, and enhance the dream-like state we want to place the reader in when we write. It’s important to have familiarity with the settings we choose. Your techniques are sound. Of course it also helps to select an interesting setting like Florence. Your description makes me want to visit Florence. Thanks again.
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CG, I do hope it’s a city you’ll visit! And you’re absolutely right — it’s a great help when the setting is such a rich one, with so many historical sites to choose from, so many interesting cultural activities to experience. Florence offered more opportunities for subtext and symbolism than I could possibly use, and I appreciated that!
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The book sounds wonderful. I love self-discovery stories. Authors who can capture a location in words are a real treat for blind or partially-sighted readers because they draw out details from a setting that we can’t see ourselves. I visited Florence in the 80′s but even then, much of the architectural landmarks and street markets were a blur. I salute all writers who cater to armchair travellers; there’s nothing like touring through new places to open up new possibilities and awaken new dreams!
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Thanks so much, Leanne. I remember on one of our visits to Italy there was a gentleman and his wife with us on a tour, and his vision was severely limited. His wife filmed hours and hours of video footage, so that he could see the sites up close on their large TV screen when they got home. I loved the affection and understanding between them — knowing that, in a way, they were only experiencing half the trip while abroad. The other half would be later, when they could watch the videos together.
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I’ve never been to Florence. I LOVE art and I fear if I went I’d never come back. :-) I can’t wait to meet Gwen. Sounds like she is in for some serious life changes.
Paris is my favorite city in the world. I studied there and go back every chance I get. I’ve used it as the setting in 2 books. Right now the settings are largely the Paris cemeteries. My favorite attraction in Paris. My problem is I find myself getting too caught up in description and I need to cut back, especially in my young adult book. I worked several experiences from my travels to Paris into my book’s storylines. I think I need to go back soon so I can polish my current book!
Safe travels on the rest of your European itinerary and I hope to join you again!
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Beth, you’ve been almost everywhere else, though!! How amazing it must have been to study in Paris… I took French in high school and college (and always desperately wished I were better at speaking it ;). I’ve worked a bit on YA projects and I have to cut down a LOT on my tendency to describe things, so I really sympathize with that. Still, what a fabulous setting Paris would be for a story — adult or YA. You know I’ve got my fingers crossed for you. Hope you have good weather and easy travels for your trip this weekend!
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I was in Florence last May, and found it unforgetable (my wife and I posed in that same spot). It was one stop on a 14 day Mediterranean cruise, and is one of the stops to which I most aspire to return.
For me, as I write historical fantasy set in the era of the Roman Empire, the spot that most informs and infuses my writing is Ephesus. The ruins of the city are huge, well beyond my previous imagining. It was once the empire’s third largest city, behind only Rome and Constantinople. I can now perfectly picture my characters walking down the broad, lamp-lit avenues, and am so grateful for the experience.
What a fun post, Marilyn! Congrats and good luck with your release. Hope you get back to Florence again soon.
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Vaughn, I love the sound of the cruise you and your wife took together!! How exciting and memorable that must have been. My husband and I were in Ephesus only once and, then, just for a day, but the experience really stayed with me — I can see why you’d love it. My husband’s a world history teacher, so he was especially awed by the ruins of the city, and we both were so impressed by the site of the library. It *is* easy to imagine the people of that time walking down that avenue! Many thanks for the good luck wishes, too — I appreciate them!
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Marilyn, Hi and thanks Therese for hosting the chat today.
Strictly speaking as a reader who happens to love great fiction. It shows when reading a novel just how well the author knows the places she/he is talking about it adds levels of depth then someone just describing the place. So it shows also Marilyn your knowledge of the places that you presented in your novel and I loved it too.
deb
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Deb, thank you so, so much!! The cities I chose for the story are spots I truly loved, so it was a pleasure to get to delve deeply into them and have my characters visit and describe the sites. It was like getting to unwrap a present every day when I sat down to write… That you enjoyed reading about them, though, is the best gift of all. Hugs and thanks! xox
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I came across this reading challenge and thought your book alone would meet the criteria:
http://www.rosecityreader.com/2011/12/2012-challenge-european-reading.html
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Liz, I just looked at the reading challenged you linked to — thanks for sharing it!! What fun ;). And, LOL, about my book…you’re right, I’ve got 8 countries covered for any of the participants!!
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What an enchanting story. I’ve been to Florence, so I can understand the allure. For me, the place I need to share in my fiction in Spain. Specifically, Madrid or Barcelona (or both). I have a story in mind, and I look forward to sifting through my memories, photos, and meals to create it.
You’re right, there is something about Europe…
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Kristan, thank you. My characters didn’t get to visit Spain on this trip, but my husband and I were there for part of our honeymoon and we loved it. Friends of ours will be in Barcelona for Christmas and New Year’s and I keep wishing we could join them…sigh. It’s a fascinating country! Best wishes to you on the story you’re writing that will be set there :).
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Congrats on your new novel! I am highly partial to books that take the reader someplace off the beaten path. Probably because I love to travel. I will never have nice furniture in my house, since whenever I have some cash, I seem to spend it on a trip.
I’m struggling with the question of whether to keep all the action in my WIP on this side of the pond, or to let my protagonist travel to Moscow. The editor says Russia is a stunt, but I’m not convinced…
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Mari, thank you for the congrats! I had to laugh when I read your comment about spending extra cash on travel — yes, I know just what you mean ;). As for Russia, I have no idea if the editor you talked with was right or not, but I will say that I’m personally fascinated to read novels that are set there, even partially. I studied Russian for a semester during college and *always* wanted to visit. I never got to go, unfortunately, so, from my POV, any book where the character travels there would be of great interest to ME!! But, of course, you need to do whatever best serves your story… Wishing you good luck with it!
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Your post has clarified for me some very practical ways to use setting to develop character, so thank you for that lesson. It’s very timely for me!
I love Peru, especially Cusco. When I started writing, I wrote a short story set in Cusco, that turned out to be quite a mess that even my husband couldn’t understand. It is waiting in the wings for the day I am ready to “fix” it, because it has kernals of what I love about Cusco in it. I just need to figure out how to do that!
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Lara, I’m so glad my post was of some help to you! I think it’s really interesting as a writer when you love a place enough that it almost becomes its own character in a story… It sounds like Peru is that way for you. I haven’t been anywhere in South America (yet!!), but I can only imagine what an amazing country Peru must be to visit. Thanks so much for telling me a little about your project!
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I can’t wait to read your book, Marilyn. I studied in Madrid my junior year of college and while there, of course, I visited many other countries, some which you mention. It would be so fun for me to read your novel and be brought back in time to Paris and Eastern Europe. I LOVE “setting” in novels and am so excited to be able to look forward to a book like yours. Thanks.
Patti
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Patti, thank you so much!! I really hope you’ll like it, and that the story will remind you of some of the excursions you took while you were abroad. It must have been wonderful to spend a whole year (or even part of it) in Spain! My husband and I loved our visit there. I remember being so impressed with the gorgeous gardens in Madrid and how it was such an open, beautiful city — plus, the Prado was amazing!
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What a charming post, Marilyn! I loved reading about how your real experiences shaped the book. I, too, was influenced by travel. Standing in Ernest Hemingway’s Key West House inspired me to write my novel.
I can’t wait to read Summer In Europe!
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Erika, thank you!! I knew you’d visited Hemingway’s house, but I hadn’t realized you’d gotten your first ideas for the story there — I love that! And I’m very much looking forward to getting my hands on Hemingway’s Girl next fall. Your release day will be here before we know it ;).
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It is true that a piece of work set in a gorgeous romantic setting soothes us and feeds us. It marries our desire for gilt with our need for, I don’t know.. settlement, relief, atonement. No that is not right either. Validation for someone small, being allowed to exist and succeed in such an environment, maybe. Lovely that you achieved that. I look forward to reading your book.. c
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Cecilia, thanks so much for your message and for the lovely way you phrased your thoughts. I think you may be right — an environment that’s as rich with beauty and history as Florence, does soothe and feed us. I think we feel part of something bigger there, something timeless. It connects us to pasts that aren’t our own but, in a way, once we embrace that, we become part of that history as well. Always interesting to reflect on such things — thank you!
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Marilyn,
I love that you’ve talked about using travel experiences in your writing. And you’re right — it’s not necessary to set a novel in a place that requires a passport.
My novel, about an identical twin who travels to Bosnia to bring her sister back home to NYC, is very inspired by my travels in and through the Balkans, including Bosnia, recently with my family. We are currently living in Prague as expats for my husband’s job, which has provided us with the dreamy ability to travel Europe extensively. Tuscany is my favorite.
Congrats! I look forward to reading your Summer in Europe!
-Jennifer King
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Jennifer, thank you. Your novel sounds fascinating — especially to me because I’d always wanted to visit Bosnia and the surrounding regions and wasn’t able to get there. In college I had a friend from Sarajevo and would have loved to have seen that city… My husband and I visited Prague, though, and really enjoyed it, and I can imagine how wonderful it is to be in such close proximity to so many fabulous places!
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