The Missing Link–NaNoEDMo
Jeanne Kisacky on Feb 12 2011 | Filed under: CRAFT
I am not James Joyce. My stream of consciousness is not fascinating, erudite, witty, or evocative. Oh, it has moments, but those moments are precious nuggets drowning in a literary quagmire. My first drafts are painfully awful. They are incomplete, they ramble, they repeat, they trail off.
That’s why Mark Twain invented editing. OK, he didn’t’ really invent it, but he deserves some credit for simply writing the following line: “The time to begin writing an article is when you have finished it to your satisfaction. By that time you begin to clearly and logically perceive what it is that you really want to say.”
Editing is how you make writing into something worth reading. So why oh why then, is it so hard to motivate myself to start an editing project?
First, it requires a critical stance (I have to unlove my draft). Second, it murders all my little darlings (I have to delete all those misplaced literary gems). Third, it often demands more focus and energy than writing (I have to keep the whole darn thing ‘in my head’ to know what can and cannot as well as should and should not be moved, rewritten or cut). It doesn’t help that editing is also sorely lacking in the pure creative joy that propels writers through to the completion of a first draft. Wouldn’t it be great if there were some strategy for getting motivated about editing? Something, say, like the excitement generated by National Novel Writing Month?
If NaNoWriMo is fabulous at motivating people to stay the course, meet a deadline, and finish a draft, it ends at what Mark Twain considered the beginning. Now before anyone’s panties get in a twist, I know full well that many who participate in NaNoWriMo do indeed spend time editing when November is over. But when they do, they’re back on their own, without the motivational support and deadlines. What if there were widgets and group support and public applause for meeting daily editing goals? What’s stopping me from simply declaring the birth of National Novel Editing Month (NaNoEdMo for short, of course) and going with it?
Well, two things. The first is that editing is unquantifiable and not so easily trackable. The beauty of NaNoWriMo is its simplicity; it counts words. Editing is inherently non-linear; it deletes, rearranges, adds, and tweaks. Imagine the absurdity of a widget that counts the daily number of words deleted from a work in progress. Or the complexity of assessing the amount of progress made in finding a new home for a misplaced scene.
Luckily (and this is the second reason I’m not declaring a new NaNoEdMo month) someone else has already done all the work! At NaNoEdMo.net, you can join an on-line group that rewards and supports editing a manuscript in 30 days. Instead of counting words, they count hours—to succeed you have to log in 50 hours of editing in the month of March. Which, by the way, is just two weeks away. Just enough time to get motivated, conquer your fears, organize your strategy, end your excuses, and log in.
So, if any of you out there want to see your first draft as a beginning not an end, but you need a deadline and a support group, then go to NaNoEdMo!
Cartoon of Mr. Eraser courtesy of john-alan at deviantART.com
























Editing is not my problem; it’s getting to 50,000 words. I would edit any day. Maybe that’s why I only have one finished novel and it has been edited to death. Wish I knew what your motivation to write so much was, and knew what my motivation to edit was and we could trade secrets!!!
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I have been lost in the wasteland of editing for a couple of months now (after thinking my ms was ready to submit, then coming back to it a year later ready to begin the hard work).
Clocking hours seems like a good way to go, because the idea of trying to get a particular amount done in a particular time makes me feel a little bit like hyperventilating…
Where’s Bear Grylls when you need him? Help!
Er, but yes. The ‘holding it all in your head thing’ is really very, very difficult. That’s where shopping some of the work out to a piece of paper helps.
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Love the eraser head drawings. :) It’s so true about the writing being the easy part. Ug!
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Loved this post! My left-brain much more prefers the editing aspect of my writing. My right-brain thoroughly enjoys aimlessly trailing through my imagination. NaNoWriMo appeals to one, and NaNoEdMo appeals to the other for complete harmony. :)
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If actually, I think editing is quantifiable if you break it down into chapters. It would be easy to have a counter that track your progress in terms of scenes or chapters. I actually think that would be more helpful than hours.
Either way, I think you’re onto something.
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Editing is usually easier for my brain than writing the draft. I like to do the polishing, but getting all that stuff out there in the first place . . . that’s where I tremble! I like the idea of tracking by hours. It is hard to quantify editing. For me, it’s mostly a question of a “that’s it!” feeling. Great when you get there.
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Me and some of the other Wrimos from the YA forums over at NanWriMo actually started a critique group after Nano. At first I was worried it would flop but there are like 5 or 6 of us that have pulled together and we’re finally getting it started.
I think editing needs MORE support than writing. Firstly–its very difficult to edit your own work without help. Second, it’s just not as fun.
I might consider Nanoedmo & suggest it to our group.
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Editing is my hardest thing too. The first time I tried, I learned the hard way acquiring a critical stance (unloving your draft, as you so aptly put it). I dove in virtually the day after I finished my first draft.
Stephen King, in On Writing speaks to this, and advises putting your finished first draft in the desk drawer for a minimum of six weeks (no peeking or tweaking) before attempting your first rewrite. Then beta-readers, then another rewrite. Whew! It’s rough, or was for me. I still feel the urge to constantly edit my old work. Instead, I take notes and put them in a file, just so I can move forward on my WIP.
I won’t be ready with this WIP for the March session, but I like the idea of committing via NaNoEdMo, Jeanne. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.
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How about waiting 2 1/2 years to edit a book? In some ways it’s kind of cool since I don’t even remember what happens next and am constantly surprised. On the other hand, I have to get reinvolved in the characters lives and it’s hard to stay focused. I find myself getting up and pacing every 20 minutes to clear my head and then having to force myself to go back to it. As Kristen suggested, breaking it into chapters as individual goals seems to help.
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This. Is. AWESOME! :)
I find getting a rough draft done relatively easy, but editing has always been like pulling teeth. This could be just what I need. Thanks for this!
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I am so in the middle of my revision headache.
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Thank you for this post Jeanne!!! Nanowrimo helped me write my first draft (55,000+ words) but I have been stuck ever since the New Year on how to work my through the editing process. NaNoEdmo here I come!!!
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Ooh, I like it! My November manuscript isn’t ready for editing – I have 8 more chapters to finish – but I love the idea!
Considering how many “I love editing!” comments you’ve got so far, I’m ashamed to admit that I LOATHE editing. Love the writing – I have 2 books done, 1 finished short story anthology and am working on another one of each. But I hate rereading my own work with a passion that borders on religious zeal. Anything to help motivate me to sit my ass down and do it would be great.
(Okay, upon re-read, it’s not that many people who like editing. Just enough to make me shake my fist at the heavens.)
Thank you for sharing. :)
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This is an excellent idea. It sounds like maybe some kinks need to be worked out, but I will definitely consider giving it a try! Thanks for the linkage.
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I LOVE this post, Jeanne. It’ strikes right to the heart of what many authors are afraid to face in their process–that the first draft is just that, a beginning. The first step. Focusing on editing and other intermediate and advanced aspects of our craft is key.
After seeing so much “quick tip” help on the Internet and social media about the secrets to getting published quick, it’s nice to have somewhere to send authors to read about the difficutlt, nuts and bolts, work that we all have to get better and better at with each new story we write.
I’d love to hear your thoughts over at my blog on Wednedays, where Jenni Holbrook-Talty and I share some of our critique and editing/craft experiences and talk about How We Write. Our goal is to encourage authors to discover their own process and to dig deeper into each WIP to make it the best it can be
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Annie – you definitely have a different problem than I do, but stick with the writing just like I have to stick with the editing.
Anna – a year sounds like the right amount of time to be able to ‘unlove’ your draft, but it does make it heard to keep it all in your head. Good luck.
Angie- I think Mr. eraser likes writing better than editing too. :-)
M.E.- you sound like you have a very good balance going.
Kristan – counting chapter by chapter progress might indeed work for motivation, let me know if it works. Hours is at least a motivation to sit with the project. I started to work up an overly elaborate approach to measuring editing progress, starting with laying out an entire editing plan, then getting points for finishing one step in the plan. Waaayyy more complicated than would work.
Lisa – editing is definitely a lot about feeling that it sounds right, but there’s so much work involved to get to that feeling.
Cassi- crit groups are better than either nano since they last way longer than a month. If you can get everyone motivated, good luck on NaNoEdMo!
Vaughn – yeah, until I unlove the draft, ‘editing’ for me is moving tiny words around the big enormous elephants on the page. Unloving it lets me tackle the elephants.
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Sarah – 2 1/2 years is a looong time to wait, but you certainly do get professional distance. The danger with chapter progress when you’ve been away from it so long is missing out on making sure you tackle any larger changes too–scene rearrangements, etc.
Cathy – glad it was what you needed when you needed it! Good luck.
thedesertrocks- I feel your pain, if commiseration helps. Hang in with it.
Nancy – sounds like you’ll be ready to go in March! Good luck.
E.D. – yeah seems like about half the world likes editing and the other half hates it. But if you’re in the latter half, take motivation wherever you can find it.
Annie – good luck with giving it a try, hope it works for you.
Anna – thank you for the kind words! I will make a point to visit your blog on wednesdays, and for all you readers out there, it’s at:
http://annawrites.com/blog/
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Aaack! If I keep going at my clip of 1000-ish words a day, I should be ready to jump into NanoEdMo. This is great motivation. Thanks!
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Third, it often demands more focus and energy than writing (I have to keep the whole darn thing ‘in my head’ to know what can and cannot as well as should and should not be moved, rewritten or cut).
So true! This is my biggest editing challenge. Like Lisa and others, though, I sort of love editing–definitely more than facing the blank page as I draft something new.
Love the idea of NaNoEdMo. Thanks for the post, Jeanne!
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This summer I started my WIP, (discovery writing in the mornings and editing in the afternoons) finished the 150K 1st draft by New Years, then $$**canned it.
And it was the best thing I ever did.
Then I sat down, having introduced myself to my characters, and plotted the book.
Now I’m 33K into what is already a more on point story. I still write in the mornings and edit in the afternoons. I’ve found I work the best in a clean environment. Not only does the house have to be clean, but so too does the manuscript. Otherwise, what’s the use of adding lyrics to a song that isn’t already singing?
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I loved my first NaNoWriMo. It taught me discipline. Thanks for the edit link, I will take a look.
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This is an excellent article. Thank you for posting it. I have written one book during a Nanowrimo and it did get published. Nanowrimo taught me that there is more than one way to write a book and how important it was for me to learn the way that worked best for me. The one year I did participate in Nanowrimo I did what I think was a very important part of what my writing process is today. I forgot about all the rules of writing. I didn’t go back and edit out all the little things that we writers tend to get our panties in a twist over when we critique, etc. I didn’t care if my writing was pretty. I wrote in passive voice in some places. The key for me was that I had a good solid outline and I knew how my book would start, where I was driving too (climactic scene) and I know what I thought I wanted the resolution to be. So I just wrote.
Anna DeStefano mentioned How We Write Wednesdays and our on going series about How We Write. Just by doing the series with Anna, I’ve already begun digging deeper into my process and really focusing on how to make all the elements that go into writing a book work to the best of my ability.
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You’ve captured my feelings about editing exactly, Jeanne. Timely too – I’ll start editing my MS on Monday.
So glad to hear I’m not the only one who feels this way – and I’m putting your Mark Twain quote on my desktop for the duration!
Thanks.
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Being new to writing I am very quickly learning how important editing is and how horrible I am at it. I appreciated hearing that I am not alone. Thank you for the inspiration and encouragement.
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Two weeks to NaNoEdMo?! Wasn’t it just January? I’m glad you posted this reminder because my manuscript needs some editing, stat! I’m not even calling it a ‘novel’ until it’s had some proper attention.
When I finish a manuscript (I’ve written a few for NaNoWriMo), I tend to put it away because I can’t stand to look at it any more. I haul it out a few months later and discover it’s not as bad as I’d thought. Even so, it can be very hard to, as you said, ‘unlove’ my draft. I have issues with changing things I’ve written, especially when they’re core things like character concepts. I often feel like my draft is written in stone. But I’m getting better! It can be so difficult to make changes, but also very freeing. Last summer I took an orange highlighter (the nearest thing to hand) and crossed out almost an entire useless chapter of my manuscript. Scary but necessary.
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[...] don’t overlook this gem about The Missing Link–NaNoEdMo. This writer needs a month of enthusiasm generated about editing the rambling novel from NaNoWriMo. [...]
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I enjoyed this post, and it’s so interesting to read the different view points in the comments. I’m a fairly quicky first-draft writer, but I still MUCH prefer editing. You’re no longer in the land of the unknown.
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What an exquisite companion to NaNoMo. Editing is certainly part of the process.
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Part of my problem with editing is while I like to do it on paper, with a pen, and sometimes scissors, to mark things up and rearrange them properly, most of my stories are so long I can’t afford to print out all 100+ pages to do it. So, I just never do. And they sit there. Oh well. Maybe one day I’ll get back to it. In severe writer’s block, editing is a good way to get back to writing without actually writing from scratch.
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