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		<title>By: Around the Web &#124; GENREALITY</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2010/02/16/the-fingerprint-of-voice/#comment-131487</link>
		<dc:creator>Around the Web &#124; GENREALITY</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Feb 2010 11:30:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Walsh has on on The Uniqueness of You that I LOVE over at Writer [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Walsh has on on The Uniqueness of You that I LOVE over at Writer [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Steve</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2010/02/16/the-fingerprint-of-voice/#comment-131389</link>
		<dc:creator>Steve</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Feb 2010 06:45:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m not visual at all. I&#039;m ear-oriented, and I enjoy the sounds of words and nuances of meaning. I love comments that imply more than they say. I&#039;m writing a first novel (YA) and my teen characters are a bunch of smart-asses. 

-Steve</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m not visual at all. I&#8217;m ear-oriented, and I enjoy the sounds of words and nuances of meaning. I love comments that imply more than they say. I&#8217;m writing a first novel (YA) and my teen characters are a bunch of smart-asses. </p>
<p>-Steve</p>
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		<title>By: Barbara Forte Abate</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2010/02/16/the-fingerprint-of-voice/#comment-131375</link>
		<dc:creator>Barbara Forte Abate</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Feb 2010 21:10:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Excellent post,Therese. Whether writing myself or reading someone elses work, I LOVE both simile and metaphor. They have the power to bring abundant life to the ordinary. Well done and my writing comes to life.
www.barbaraforteabate.com</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent post,Therese. Whether writing myself or reading someone elses work, I LOVE both simile and metaphor. They have the power to bring abundant life to the ordinary. Well done and my writing comes to life.<br />
<a  href="http://www.barbaraforteabate.com" rel="nofollow">http://www.barbaraforteabate.com</a></p>
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		<title>By: Cassi</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2010/02/16/the-fingerprint-of-voice/#comment-131339</link>
		<dc:creator>Cassi</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Feb 2010 23:16:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think this is a very good post.  There is a lot of writing advice out there and it could be very easy to lose your style in everyones preferences.  

I&#039;m not sure what exactly my fingerprint looks like.  I&#039;ll have to read some of my own stuff to figure that out.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think this is a very good post.  There is a lot of writing advice out there and it could be very easy to lose your style in everyones preferences.  </p>
<p>I&#8217;m not sure what exactly my fingerprint looks like.  I&#8217;ll have to read some of my own stuff to figure that out.</p>
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		<title>By: Julie Kibler</title>
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		<dc:creator>Julie Kibler</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Feb 2010 22:05:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I love metaphor. I love it in music, I love it in movies, I love it in books.

Even beyond the simile, which I like, too, metaphor makes me giddy. When I discover some everyday thing in my life could be a metaphor for a deeper idea (and OH, JOY! when it works for my WIP!), I can spend a lot of time studying it and perfecting the transfer from my brain to paper. 

I also enjoy reading through a first draft and realizing I&#039;ve &quot;accidentally&quot; created a theme using objects or settings, etc. Far better than if I&#039;d planned it.

On that two-simile thing -- I&#039;m reading A Gate at the Stairs by Lorrie Moore. She often uses two similes in the same sentence. And she&#039;s a celebrated literary writer, right? The key is doing it well, I think.
.-= Julie Kibler&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://whatwomenwritetx.blogspot.com/2010/02/buried-under-white-piles.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Buried Under White Piles&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love metaphor. I love it in music, I love it in movies, I love it in books.</p>
<p>Even beyond the simile, which I like, too, metaphor makes me giddy. When I discover some everyday thing in my life could be a metaphor for a deeper idea (and OH, JOY! when it works for my WIP!), I can spend a lot of time studying it and perfecting the transfer from my brain to paper. </p>
<p>I also enjoy reading through a first draft and realizing I&#8217;ve &#8220;accidentally&#8221; created a theme using objects or settings, etc. Far better than if I&#8217;d planned it.</p>
<p>On that two-simile thing &#8212; I&#8217;m reading A Gate at the Stairs by Lorrie Moore. She often uses two similes in the same sentence. And she&#8217;s a celebrated literary writer, right? The key is doing it well, I think.<br />
.-= Julie Kibler&#180;s last blog ..<a  href="http://whatwomenwritetx.blogspot.com/2010/02/buried-under-white-piles.html" rel="nofollow">Buried Under White Piles</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Josa</title>
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		<dc:creator>Josa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Feb 2010 20:01:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am in such a twiddle about how I do it, that reading this post has sort of calmed me down. Writerly fingerprint? sometimes what I write makes me happy, sometimes it bores the f&#039;ing pants off me. I am near the end of 1st draft of WIP, and motoring. The first 25k landed me an agent. She liked my &#039;voice&#039;. O dear not really calm at all.....</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am in such a twiddle about how I do it, that reading this post has sort of calmed me down. Writerly fingerprint? sometimes what I write makes me happy, sometimes it bores the f&#8217;ing pants off me. I am near the end of 1st draft of WIP, and motoring. The first 25k landed me an agent. She liked my &#8216;voice&#8217;. O dear not really calm at all&#8230;..</p>
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		<title>By: Melanie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Melanie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Feb 2010 18:47:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m glad you said that about similes. I avoid them like the plague because I feel like that can sound forced, BUT if done well, they&#039;re like the perfect icing on an already decadent cake. (ha, I didn&#039;t intend to write one there.) I stick to metaphors.

I have lofty goals for my new wip -- I want light to play such an important role that it&#039;s almost like another character. As someone who tends not to describe things much, it will be tricky.
.-= Melanie&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://melanieavila.blogspot.com/2010/02/another-last-and-beginning.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Another &quot;Last&quot; and a Beginning&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m glad you said that about similes. I avoid them like the plague because I feel like that can sound forced, BUT if done well, they&#8217;re like the perfect icing on an already decadent cake. (ha, I didn&#8217;t intend to write one there.) I stick to metaphors.</p>
<p>I have lofty goals for my new wip &#8212; I want light to play such an important role that it&#8217;s almost like another character. As someone who tends not to describe things much, it will be tricky.<br />
.-= Melanie&#180;s last blog ..<a  href="http://melanieavila.blogspot.com/2010/02/another-last-and-beginning.html" rel="nofollow">Another &quot;Last&quot; and a Beginning</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: sara</title>
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		<dc:creator>sara</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Feb 2010 18:35:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Can&#039;t. Stop. Looking. at the pretty picture! I LOVE that swirl of colors :-)

I think the important thing to do is know the &quot;rules&quot; well enough to know which ones are breakable when you get to them in your own writing.

Personally, I&#039;m big on describing scents in my writing. I don&#039;t overdo it, but I probably do it more than most. And I love reading them in scenes... There&#039;s something about imagining the smell of something that just zaps me right into the story.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Can&#8217;t. Stop. Looking. at the pretty picture! I LOVE that swirl of colors :-)</p>
<p>I think the important thing to do is know the &#8220;rules&#8221; well enough to know which ones are breakable when you get to them in your own writing.</p>
<p>Personally, I&#8217;m big on describing scents in my writing. I don&#8217;t overdo it, but I probably do it more than most. And I love reading them in scenes&#8230; There&#8217;s something about imagining the smell of something that just zaps me right into the story.</p>
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		<title>By: Kathleen Bolton</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kathleen Bolton</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Feb 2010 18:32:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sometimes you can capture two or three dimensions (sight, taste, sound etc) in one good similie than in a whole sheaf of exposition.  I&#039;m always trying to inject sounds for some reason, dunno why. I guess that&#039;s my imprint.

Great post! Lots to mull here.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sometimes you can capture two or three dimensions (sight, taste, sound etc) in one good similie than in a whole sheaf of exposition.  I&#8217;m always trying to inject sounds for some reason, dunno why. I guess that&#8217;s my imprint.</p>
<p>Great post! Lots to mull here.</p>
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		<title>By: Deborah Bundy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Deborah Bundy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Feb 2010 17:55:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Having been a visual artist before becoming a writer I do detail, color, light in my character&#039;s world. Once, I read that one should only use one adjective for each noun, and sometimes none. I went through one of my stories and deleted, deleted. When I finished and read the result, the story felt dead to me. I&#039;d cut all the things I love about life. Painting a scene, I&#039;d say is my fingerprint. Nice article. Thanks for sharing. I&#039;m going to follow you. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Having been a visual artist before becoming a writer I do detail, color, light in my character&#8217;s world. Once, I read that one should only use one adjective for each noun, and sometimes none. I went through one of my stories and deleted, deleted. When I finished and read the result, the story felt dead to me. I&#8217;d cut all the things I love about life. Painting a scene, I&#8217;d say is my fingerprint. Nice article. Thanks for sharing. I&#8217;m going to follow you. :)</p>
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