On your mark, get set… Pre-plotting basics
Therese Walsh on Feb 10 2009 | Filed under: CRAFT
February is plotting month here at Writer Unboxed, which is about perfect for me as I plunge into the world of book #2. I have a lot of work ahead of me, and much of it involves heavy-duty plotting of a complicated dual storyline–thinking through every scene to ensure that the plots move forward, that the opening hooks, that the middle doesn’t sag, that the end is satisfying. But I also think it’s important to invest some time into pre-plotting. What’s pre-plotting? This:
Polishing the vision. You have an idea you love, and you’re excited to get started. But wait. Can you answer some basic questions about this new story concept of yours?
* What kind of book will it be? What will be the general flavor of the book? The genre?
* Who will be your audience?
* Will your story have a message, and if so, what will it be? What sort of themes will you tap into?
* How do you envision the book structurally? Will it unfold as a straight tale, or will you interweave story lines and points of view?
These might seem like basic questions–and they are–but I think they’re sometimes overlooked in a writer’s enthusiasm to get writing. Not attending to them early on can cost valuable time later and can even become the crack in your story’s foundation.
Alternatively, being sure about the kind of book you’re about to write and who you’re writing it for can help in dozens of ways. It can help determine what your first few pages, even your first sentence, should relay; it can help by reminding you of established expectations for your genre; and it can help to redirect you whenever you’re stuck.
Casting characters. Characters become the heart and soul of your book, so it’s important to get their fundamental selves right, right from the start. Here are some questions you might ask yourself:
* Do you need a large cast of characters or do you prefer a small ensemble?
* Have you established characters who can be in conflict with one another? What types of conflict?
* How will each character change throughout the course of the book?
* Which characters will showcase your theme?
* Maybe most importantly, will you want to spend months (maybe years) of your life perfecting these characters, and do you think readers will ultimately find them intriguing enough to read about?
Hunting for authenticity. I love research. I take great pleasure in finding just the right detail to help twist up a plot or refine a character. Research lovers like me may have to be careful not to overdo it, though, and risk bogging down the story with details readers won’t care about.
Even if you hate research, there’s no denying it can help root your story authentically–whether you’re talking about details of a place or thing or type of person or even an emotion. I hope none of you shuns research entirely, because the unearthing process often holds a surprising amount of story gold. Find a gem and don’t know where to put it? Make a list of interesting details (e.g. Rome has lots of hidden underground chambers, former houses and the like) and maybe later you’ll figure out how best to use them. Here are some of my favorite ways to hunt for authenticity:
* reading books and content on trustworthy websites
* scouring maps
* interviewing experts in various fields–firemen and lawyers and twins, for example
* visiting a place personally (This can be the most valuable, as you can speak to the locals, walk the land, familiarize yourself with customs and more.)
Remembering what you’ve learned. Pre-plotting might mean reading or reviewing a few craft books. Not chapters on polishing your prose–this isn’t the time for that–but definitely chapters on structure and plotting. Donald Maass’s Writing the Breakout Novel was probably the most important book on my shelf when it came to plotting my last novel, and you can bet I’ll read through it again.
Once your pre-plotting is finished, it’s time to take a deep breath and begin the challenging and rewarding work of plotting your story.
What steps do you take before beginning a new project?
Write on, all!
























Thank you for making Feb. plotting month. Before I start, I like to reread parts of books and articles from writers on the web that made me think about process. I also research my characters profession and where he/she came from. Most often though, there’s a scene in my head that I just have to write and get it out. Then I can go back to basics.
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Vicky, I often have scene fragments in my head from the beginning, too. They become the touchstones for the whole novel and can inspire me on when things get rough in the drafting phase of things.
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I love the early world building. Expanding on the rules of magic, what types of characters. I also write snippets of scenes that come to me. It really grounds the characters for me. Once I see them in the story, their profiles fill out more easily.
I have an Award for WU!
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Thank you for the award, Feywriter Mary!
Something popped into my head as I was reading your comment re: grounding the story through scene fragments. I do that, too, but I also use music to help set the tone (koff) for whatever I’m writing. I’ve already honed in on my theme song for book #2.
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I do dream work on stories. I do a lot of intense visualization at night, before bed, to world build. Sometimes I will dream about my whole story.
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Thanks for the shoutout, Feywriter Mary!
It sounds weird, but I do moodscapes in the pre-plotting part. Certain scenes pop in my head and they evoke a certain mood, and I tinker and tinker until I get the right feeling down.
Maybe that’s why my drafts are such a mess initially, LOL. :-(
Great tips, Therese!
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Thea, that’s a great way to do it, and nobody tells a story like you do.
Kath, I love the idea of moodscapes!
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I never gave the pre-plotting process much thought. I just did it. Until reading your article, Therese, I never realized all the steps I took before I wrote a story was referred to as pre-plotting. (Mind you, I never had the opportunity to take creative writing workshops until recently.) I just thought I was taking the necessary steps a novice writer like me took to keep the story on track, to keep my writing organized and to keep me from getting confused!
After reading your article, it was comforting to know I’m on the right track. Thank you for explaining the process in a concise manner that is understandable to aspiring writers and a great reminder for more experienced authors to pay attention to these details that can help simplify the writing process. There are some wonderful tips here! Thank you!
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I’m so glad that February is plotting month!! I really want help here… it seems like a lot of advice out there is about SELLING my novel, which I obviously don’t need yet. :) I’m in preplotting stages for two different novels, and I’m having trouble deciding which one to pursue… one is more high-concept and a funnier setup, but I’m worried about being able to make it authentic beyond that. The other is not as high-concept, but my life experiences feed into being able to make it more real. Ah, decisions!!
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I get very excited when I have new ideas. I have this need to put them on paper right away. For example, this week, in my book, I jumped directly from chapter 21 to 23 cause I was so excited with what was going to happen. In addition, them, I wrote chapter 24. Today I have to tell myself that I need to slow down, get back, and do the 22.
I agreed with you about the need of research. In the first book, I did a lot of it but in this one, I have less time. I think I will do that later. For example, if I say that today is new moon, in seven days what kind of moon is it? I think I can put it later and get on with the action. :)
Good luck for the second book! Hope you have many wonderful ideas!
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Hi Lorna, I’m glad you found the post helpful!
Maya, good luck with your decision. Maybe ask yourself which you would regret NOT pursuing? (Maybe one of them already has its hooks into you and you don’t know it!)
ClaudiaV, I have a friend who always inserts research questions for herself (e.g. “Go back later and include information on such and such an opera.”) It can help to do that so that you don’t disrupt the creative floor. Thanks for the good luck, and right back at you!
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