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	<title>Comments on: Use the comment feature for better storytelling</title>
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		<title>By: Kristan</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/09/18/use-the-comment-feature-for-better-storytelling/#comment-85905</link>
		<dc:creator>Kristan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Sep 2008 20:22:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Like most others, I use this for commenting on other people&#039;s documents and never once thought to use it for myself. Perhaps it will reduce my need to print and hand-write notes? Yay saving the environment!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Like most others, I use this for commenting on other people&#8217;s documents and never once thought to use it for myself. Perhaps it will reduce my need to print and hand-write notes? Yay saving the environment!</p>
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		<title>By: Kathleen Bolton</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/09/18/use-the-comment-feature-for-better-storytelling/#comment-85890</link>
		<dc:creator>Kathleen Bolton</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Sep 2008 18:01:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve used comment if I&#039;m reading someone else&#039;s stuff, but I&#039;ve never thought to use it for myself.  This morning, I did.  Will this stop my post-it addiction?  Stay tuned....</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve used comment if I&#8217;m reading someone else&#8217;s stuff, but I&#8217;ve never thought to use it for myself.  This morning, I did.  Will this stop my post-it addiction?  Stay tuned&#8230;.</p>
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		<title>By: Thea</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/09/18/use-the-comment-feature-for-better-storytelling/#comment-85884</link>
		<dc:creator>Thea</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Sep 2008 16:00:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve found the comments feature extremely useful in reading and reviewing legal contracts as well. My sometimes snarky (&#039;what the heck does that mean???) comments are very  helpful to my lawyer as our POVs regarding the contracts may be very different.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve found the comments feature extremely useful in reading and reviewing legal contracts as well. My sometimes snarky (&#8216;what the heck does that mean???) comments are very  helpful to my lawyer as our POVs regarding the contracts may be very different.</p>
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		<title>By: Melanie</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/09/18/use-the-comment-feature-for-better-storytelling/#comment-85882</link>
		<dc:creator>Melanie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Sep 2008 15:25:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Perfect timing! I&#039;m in edits now and just last night was wondering if there was a way to make a note to myself. Thank you!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Perfect timing! I&#8217;m in edits now and just last night was wondering if there was a way to make a note to myself. Thank you!</p>
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		<title>By: Miranda</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/09/18/use-the-comment-feature-for-better-storytelling/#comment-85881</link>
		<dc:creator>Miranda</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Sep 2008 15:14:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The Comment feature is a beta reader&#039;s best friend.  I&#039;ve used the heck out of it on numerous occasions!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The Comment feature is a beta reader&#8217;s best friend.  I&#8217;ve used the heck out of it on numerous occasions!</p>
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		<title>By: Amy Nathan</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/09/18/use-the-comment-feature-for-better-storytelling/#comment-85874</link>
		<dc:creator>Amy Nathan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Sep 2008 13:51:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I like this feature for giving feedback to my CPs because it doesn&#039;t interfere with their original work. To me sometimes the deleting and inserting is distracting and I&#039;d rather read someone&#039;s thoughts or see an edit &quot;on the side&quot; than have it changed. 

I&#039;ve never thought of using it for myself.  Thanks for the great idea.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I like this feature for giving feedback to my CPs because it doesn&#8217;t interfere with their original work. To me sometimes the deleting and inserting is distracting and I&#8217;d rather read someone&#8217;s thoughts or see an edit &#8220;on the side&#8221; than have it changed. </p>
<p>I&#8217;ve never thought of using it for myself.  Thanks for the great idea.</p>
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		<title>By: Therese Walsh</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/09/18/use-the-comment-feature-for-better-storytelling/#comment-85730</link>
		<dc:creator>Therese Walsh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Sep 2008 14:58:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I adore the comment feature. I can&#039;t imagine writing without it!

Thanks for this post, Ray.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I adore the comment feature. I can&#8217;t imagine writing without it!</p>
<p>Thanks for this post, Ray.</p>
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