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	<title>Comments on: Story as River</title>
	<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/04/17/story-as-river/</link>
	<description>About the craft and business of genre fiction</description>
	<pubDate>Sat, 30 Aug 2008 01:15:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>by: Mary Marvella</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/04/17/story-as-river/#comment-67831</link>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Apr 2008 01:59:01 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Food for thought. I actually like books that aren't about conflict after conflict. Guess I need to get with the program more.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Food for thought. I actually like books that aren&#8217;t about conflict after conflict. Guess I need to get with the program more.
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		<title>by: Therese Walsh</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/04/17/story-as-river/#comment-67819</link>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Apr 2008 00:24:14 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>&lt;em&gt;And I think “the gap” can be a terrific diagnostic tool.&lt;/em&gt;

What a great post, Ray. Thanks so much!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><em>And I think “the gap” can be a terrific diagnostic tool.</em></p>
<p>What a great post, Ray. Thanks so much!
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		<title>by: Richard Mabry</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/04/17/story-as-river/#comment-67806</link>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2008 20:16:12 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Ray,
Excellent advice, as I would expect from you. This seems to be a corollary to the concept Donald Maas espouses--be certain there's conflict on every page. I'm off to purchase (and, more importantly, study) McKee's book. And I'd like to know when yours is available.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ray,<br />
Excellent advice, as I would expect from you. This seems to be a corollary to the concept Donald Maas espouses&#8211;be certain there&#8217;s conflict on every page. I&#8217;m off to purchase (and, more importantly, study) McKee&#8217;s book. And I&#8217;d like to know when yours is available.
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		<title>by: Kathleen Bolton</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/04/17/story-as-river/#comment-67783</link>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2008 15:10:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>I've gotta get this book.  It's one of the few I don't have yet.  Writers rave over it still, even though it's 10 years old.

Great post as usual, Ray.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve gotta get this book.  It&#8217;s one of the few I don&#8217;t have yet.  Writers rave over it still, even though it&#8217;s 10 years old.</p>
<p>Great post as usual, Ray.
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		<title>by: Eric von Rothkirch</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/04/17/story-as-river/#comment-67776</link>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2008 14:11:37 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>In their blind quest to be original a lot of writers reject McKee, which to me is sad because most of what he suggests will only make a story better.

Good post Ray.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In their blind quest to be original a lot of writers reject McKee, which to me is sad because most of what he suggests will only make a story better.</p>
<p>Good post Ray.
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