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	<title>Comments on: Writing for Effect</title>
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	<description>about the craft and business of genre fiction</description>
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		<title>By: Richard Mabry</title>
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		<dc:creator>Richard Mabry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Mar 2008 16:37:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ray,
Surely that&#039;s not you in the picture, although I&#039;ve felt like it after you shredded a couple of my submissions. Seriously, sounds like a great book.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ray,<br />
Surely that&#8217;s not you in the picture, although I&#8217;ve felt like it after you shredded a couple of my submissions. Seriously, sounds like a great book.</p>
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		<title>By: Therese Walsh</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/03/20/writing-for-effect/comment-page-1/#comment-65279</link>
		<dc:creator>Therese Walsh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Mar 2008 16:12:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That IS a scary picture, but it drove home a great post, Ray, thanks. And best of luck with this project!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That IS a scary picture, but it drove home a great post, Ray, thanks. And best of luck with this project!</p>
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		<title>By: Kathleen Bolton</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/03/20/writing-for-effect/comment-page-1/#comment-65273</link>
		<dc:creator>Kathleen Bolton</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Mar 2008 15:03:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>These are good reminders, Ray.  Sometimes I get so caught up in making sure the details fit, that I forget I need that emotional response to work...and too many details can undercut that.

KKIA--I hope you have a chapter on kung-fu kitties whomping on Vladimir. :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>These are good reminders, Ray.  Sometimes I get so caught up in making sure the details fit, that I forget I need that emotional response to work&#8230;and too many details can undercut that.</p>
<p>KKIA&#8211;I hope you have a chapter on kung-fu kitties whomping on Vladimir. :-)</p>
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		<title>By: theamcginnis</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2008/03/20/writing-for-effect/comment-page-1/#comment-65267</link>
		<dc:creator>theamcginnis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Mar 2008 13:53:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>wow, scary picture today!!! ray, i&#039;ll take whatever help i can get. just don&#039;t hurt me!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>wow, scary picture today!!! ray, i&#8217;ll take whatever help i can get. just don&#8217;t hurt me!!</p>
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