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	<title>Comments on: Fighting the Sag in 10 Steps</title>
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		<title>By: Lee</title>
		<link>http://writerunboxed.com/2007/01/04/fighting-the-sag/#comment-2648</link>
		<dc:creator>Lee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Jan 2007 22:40:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>There good pointers Therese.

Cheers Lee</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There good pointers Therese.</p>
<p>Cheers Lee</p>
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		<title>By: thea mcginnis</title>
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		<dc:creator>thea mcginnis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Jan 2007 15:32:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>ok, you&#039;re making me think here!!!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>ok, you&#8217;re making me think here!!!!</p>
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		<title>By: Kathleen Bolton</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kathleen Bolton</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Jan 2007 14:12:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>These are very good ideas and are coming at a good time for me.  I just discovered I needed another antagonist so I could build enough conflict to get through the dreaded middle crater.  I hope this&#039;ll open up the story more.  That&#039;s the theory, anyway.  Good luck with your own flabby middle!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>These are very good ideas and are coming at a good time for me.  I just discovered I needed another antagonist so I could build enough conflict to get through the dreaded middle crater.  I hope this&#8217;ll open up the story more.  That&#8217;s the theory, anyway.  Good luck with your own flabby middle!</p>
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		<title>By: Elena Greene</title>
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		<dc:creator>Elena Greene</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Jan 2007 13:50:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good ideas, all.

Another approach to the Sagging Middle is to make sure there&#039;s a climactic event (like the Ordeal in Writer&#039;s Journey) somewhere around the middle.  Of course, I&#039;m not implying that it&#039;s easy to think of what that climactic event should be...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good ideas, all.</p>
<p>Another approach to the Sagging Middle is to make sure there&#8217;s a climactic event (like the Ordeal in Writer&#8217;s Journey) somewhere around the middle.  Of course, I&#8217;m not implying that it&#8217;s easy to think of what that climactic event should be&#8230;</p>
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