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		<title>By: Jack Slyde</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jack Slyde</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Sep 2006 00:38:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the welcome guys. 

I don&#039;t know if anybody has read that Wilbur Smith book, but it was one of the Courtney books - When the Lion Feeds, A Falcon Flies, something like that - and Mr Smith killed off my favourite character, an Englishman called Duffy. I was horrified and amazed at the same time and had to reread the page about a dozen times.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the welcome guys. </p>
<p>I don&#8217;t know if anybody has read that Wilbur Smith book, but it was one of the Courtney books &#8211; When the Lion Feeds, A Falcon Flies, something like that &#8211; and Mr Smith killed off my favourite character, an Englishman called Duffy. I was horrified and amazed at the same time and had to reread the page about a dozen times.</p>
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		<title>By: Kathleen Bolton</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kathleen Bolton</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Sep 2006 18:47:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Beth in Little Women.  I freaked out.  I didn&#039;t think the author would DO something like that.  Then she did.

It&#039;s a good technique though.  I call it the Boromir Effect.  Killing off a really good secondary character (like Sirius Black) tells the reader anything goes when they pick up a book by you.

Great post!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Beth in Little Women.  I freaked out.  I didn&#8217;t think the author would DO something like that.  Then she did.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s a good technique though.  I call it the Boromir Effect.  Killing off a really good secondary character (like Sirius Black) tells the reader anything goes when they pick up a book by you.</p>
<p>Great post!</p>
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		<title>By: melly</title>
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		<dc:creator>melly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Sep 2006 16:00:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great introduction and first post, Jack.

I don&#039;t remember ever having a certain book or movie that transferred me into that grownup world, I think I always knew that somehow. I feel that fairy tails, ooops, tales, actually exemplify that very well. Great subject. Got me thinking.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great introduction and first post, Jack.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t remember ever having a certain book or movie that transferred me into that grownup world, I think I always knew that somehow. I feel that fairy tails, ooops, tales, actually exemplify that very well. Great subject. Got me thinking.</p>
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		<title>By: Therese Walsh</title>
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		<dc:creator>Therese Walsh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Sep 2006 15:58:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>WELCOME, JACK! We&#039;re so glad to have you with us. :)

What shattered my illusions about happily-ever-afters (aside from my father having me watch those horrible Nostradamus specials with him)? The literature I was exposed to in high-school English classes. I would never have chosen these books myself, and I always felt like cracking one open was a painful and unnecessary thing, but then I would inevitably get involved in the story and have to go out and buy the book for myself. Books I remember for their realism:

Steinbeck&#039;s Of Mice and Men
William Golding&#039;s Lord of the Flies
Pat Frank&#039;s Alas, Babylon
Colleen McCullough&#039;s The Thorn Birds
Bernard Malamud&#039;s The Assistant
Tennessee Williams&#039; play A Streetcar Named Desire (with that buff pic of Marlon Brando on the cover...)

My cousin let me borrow his copy of Stephen King&#039;s Cujo, which also made an impact. All that struggle, and the boy dies at the end! I was horrified.

Melissa, I think that&#039;s terrific that John Jakes wrote back to you! A big aside here, but my bro-in law wrote to &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.leonardbernstein.com/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Leonard Bernstein&lt;/a&gt; when he was a child to say that Leonard was his favorite composer. Bernstein, surprisingly, wrote back. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>WELCOME, JACK! We&#8217;re so glad to have you with us. :)</p>
<p>What shattered my illusions about happily-ever-afters (aside from my father having me watch those horrible Nostradamus specials with him)? The literature I was exposed to in high-school English classes. I would never have chosen these books myself, and I always felt like cracking one open was a painful and unnecessary thing, but then I would inevitably get involved in the story and have to go out and buy the book for myself. Books I remember for their realism:</p>
<p>Steinbeck&#8217;s Of Mice and Men<br />
William Golding&#8217;s Lord of the Flies<br />
Pat Frank&#8217;s Alas, Babylon<br />
Colleen McCullough&#8217;s The Thorn Birds<br />
Bernard Malamud&#8217;s The Assistant<br />
Tennessee Williams&#8217; play A Streetcar Named Desire (with that buff pic of Marlon Brando on the cover&#8230;)</p>
<p>My cousin let me borrow his copy of Stephen King&#8217;s Cujo, which also made an impact. All that struggle, and the boy dies at the end! I was horrified.</p>
<p>Melissa, I think that&#8217;s terrific that John Jakes wrote back to you! A big aside here, but my bro-in law wrote to <a  href="http://www.leonardbernstein.com/" rel="nofollow">Leonard Bernstein</a> when he was a child to say that Leonard was his favorite composer. Bernstein, surprisingly, wrote back. :)</p>
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		<title>By: Melissa Marsh</title>
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		<dc:creator>Melissa Marsh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Sep 2006 15:12:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great post, Jack.  Welcome to Writer Unboxed!

I read John Jakes&#039; North and South trilogy in junior high.  In the second one, &quot;Love and War&quot;, he kills off one of the main characters. I was actually quite horrified and even wrote him a letter asking him how he could (gasp!) do such a thing.  He responded and said that the main character&#039;s death showed the truly horrible face of war.

That book changed how I look at the world, too.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great post, Jack.  Welcome to Writer Unboxed!</p>
<p>I read John Jakes&#8217; North and South trilogy in junior high.  In the second one, &#8220;Love and War&#8221;, he kills off one of the main characters. I was actually quite horrified and even wrote him a letter asking him how he could (gasp!) do such a thing.  He responded and said that the main character&#8217;s death showed the truly horrible face of war.</p>
<p>That book changed how I look at the world, too.</p>
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		<title>By: Eric</title>
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		<dc:creator>Eric</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Sep 2006 15:04:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My equivalent was seeing The World According to Garp as a kid. Lots of adult themes in there, and for me at a young age it was a very strong introduction to the idea that &quot;bad things can happen to good people.&quot;

Seeing that and Raiders of the Lost Ark by the age of six probably scarred me for life, in a good way. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My equivalent was seeing The World According to Garp as a kid. Lots of adult themes in there, and for me at a young age it was a very strong introduction to the idea that &#8220;bad things can happen to good people.&#8221;</p>
<p>Seeing that and Raiders of the Lost Ark by the age of six probably scarred me for life, in a good way. :)</p>
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